Trailing sun-bleached hairs
Tracing hidden freckles
Inhaling your breath
Sinking into your scent
Your light coursing
Through my veins
Waking with a start
Fumbling for the receiver
Aching to crawl through the phone
And curl into you
Trailing sun-bleached hairs
Tracing hidden freckles
Inhaling your breath
Sinking into your scent
Your light coursing
Through my veins
Waking with a start
Fumbling for the receiver
Aching to crawl through the phone
And curl into you
Your light coursing through my veins. Great line!
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Thank you, Rob! I’m delighted that you like it.
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It’s a deeply spiritual moment…
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Yes….
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I really love this.
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I’m so glad! Thank you. 🙂
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That “your light coursing through my veins” line is brilliant. As RMG says, it’s very spiritual. Wonderful stuff.
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Thanks so much! I’m delighted you like it.
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Beautiful work, Danica. I especially like the ending, which surprised me. I assumed they were in the same room.
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Thank you, Rich! I’m happy that the ending surprised you, it’s what I hoped the reader would experience.
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I once had a long distance relationship. I crawled through the phone many times. Beautiful last line.
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I read somewhere that you haven’t lived until you’re meeting your love at the airport. I wanted to capture something similar here. Thanks, I’m very happy you like it.
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Danica
I want to feel the desire of needing, wanting to crawl thru the phone line. Sounds sexy. I could handle more to this story, of course you may make quite a stir with reader excitement.
M
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It’s a wonderful kind of pain, isn’t it, M? Maybe there’s another installment….
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That would tickle my fancy to fantasy? Another installment, I vote for. You so great at sending the message with few words which makes your writing more powerful.
🙂
M
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I love your vote, thank you! Thanks also for the wonderful compliment. It means a lot to me, M. 🙂
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Reading a Beautiful Life
u just KNOW there will b NO strife
No matter how she writes about light
Trust Danica to get it JUST RIGHT
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Thank you! I always welcome your kind words and wonderful poetry! 🙂
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